Week Seventy Trifextra Challenge: exactly 33 words inspired by the following picture.
Photo credit: mohammadali / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-SA
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Someone has followed us here.
Are you sure? But who….?
No! Don’t look!
Listen. Stealthy footsteps.
Pebbles skitter. A shutter clicks.
What now?
Nothing.
Nothing?
Shhh. Stay calm, be still.
Now,
We wait.
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This is great! Love the tension and the mystery. Great take on the prompt!
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I love this! I would not have believed that only 33 words could give me goosebumps, but they did!
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Ooo. This is creepy!! You’ve definitely thought outside the box for this challenge, and we love it!
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I love the build up of the tension!
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Ooo! A cliffhanger, for sure. 🙂
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There is so much tension and unknowing in this that I don’t imagine it ends well. Really good.
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Very good. Had me on edge. D~
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