Set Free

 Ondřej Žváček, Wikimedia Commons

Ondřej Žváček, Wikimedia Commons

That was the end, the first time I saw the real you.  Dawn breaks on a dark night.  The sad, the bad, the harsh cruel lies.  All of it done.

That was the day you set me free.


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Trifextra Week 100:   a 33-word response to the following snippet:  The first time I saw. . .

Here’s the catch: all of your 33 words must be one syllable each.  We’re going low-brow on your this week.  Or not.  Can you class it up under these restrictions?  Give us your best.
To clarify, we are giving you 5 words.  We want another 33 from you, for a grand total of 38.

9 thoughts on “Set Free

  1. Seeing someone for who they really are is often the first step towards freedom. I love the line, “Dawn breaks on a dark night”–what a beautiful, and accurate, depiction.


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