Winter seemed reluctant to release its hold. There was nothing green yet anywhere I looked, and the air stayed cold until well past mid day. Sometimes the sun would break through the grey mist with a half-hearted attempt at cheering up the sad and dismal countryside , but all that brown was discouraging, and day after day it seemed to simply give up without a fight.
No, come back! I wanted to shout at it. Try harder. Winter is an asshole, you can make it go away. But the sun doesn’t listen to anyone.
Those last few bleak days I spent hesitantly preparing to leave, because I was reluctant too. Remiss to walk away from a life that had become impossible, but which remained, in spite of everything, still strangely comforting in its familiarity. Afraid, wary, hanging back, I kept searching for one good reason not to go. There were reasons, but in the end, none of them were good enough.
A shrill whistle sounded in the distance and the tracks grumbled and shook as a numbing north wind whipped stray locks of hair across my face and into my eyes, some of the long strands sticking to the tears that kept stubbornly falling no matter how many times I brushed them away. My ticket to freedom was crushed and broken in one clenched fist. The other one dragged my heavy bag across the platform. And then I boarded the southbound train. With all my might and resolve I resisted the backward pull and in my head I wiped the slate clean.
I felt as stubborn as the sun. Strong and steady and enduring. Soon I’d be ready to shine again.
The Speakeasy at Yeah Write # 157 – include the following sentence as the FIRST line in your submission: “Winter seemed reluctant to release its hold.”
That’s really good!
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I could feel the push and pull of emotions with the decision of whether or not to go (and the ultimate choice to leave.) Sometimes familiarity isn’t enough to keep us rooted.
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Winter is an asshole! I love it; I could definitely feel the growth that comes from letting go and moving on. Like the sun, we shine on!
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That’s a powerful ending line. Also, “Winter is an asshole” made me laugh.
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Seriously, winter IS an asshole. 🙂 This is just beautiful writing – plain and simple. I think I’ve been in that place you describe and this rang very true.
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Loved the way you described the protagonist’ s dilemma-loved the line,” Remiss to walk away from a life that had become impossible, but which remained, in spite of everything, still strangely comforting in its familiarity. ‘A wonderfully hopeful ending-human spirit is so resilient 🙂
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A good example of why impulsive moves are sometimes best.
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This is great! I love the way the narrator’s emotions match the weather. And I love the line “Winter is an asshole” – I’m feeling the same way these days! 🙂
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Winter certainly is an asshole! lol I loved that line.
Wonderful story!
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Ah, I hate goodbyes…this captured that feeling for me.
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